Daily Archives: April 1, 2012

Sentence Alert!

I love it when a sentence takes you down unexpected paths past unexpected places:

“…I let myself sink into poverty, in a manner that was deliberate, rigorous and not altogether devoid of elegance.” from Monsieur Pain by Roberto Bolano, translated by Chris Andrews

Why is this sentence effective? When I think of characters falling into poverty, it usually isn’t self-inflicted (at least not with purposeful intent), and it usually isn’t done with rigor or elegance. There’s so much here that’s out of the norm, it makes the character intensely interesting. I want to know more.

Very effective. Now, back to our regularly scheduled program…




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