“Two things to get straight from the beginning: I hate doctors and have never joined a support group in my life. At seventy-three, I’m not about to change. The mental health establishment can go screw itself on a barren hilltop in the rain before I touch their snake oil or listen to the visionless chatter of men half my age. I have shot Germans in the fields of Normandy, filed twenty-six patents, married three women, survived them all, Continue reading
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by Jilanne Hoffmann | June 13, 2013 · 3:29 pm
I’m Hearing Voices, Strong Ones – Paragraph Analysis
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Tagged as Adam Haslett, craft, first paragraph, openings, short stories, unreliable narrator, writing
by Jilanne Hoffmann | March 18, 2012 · 11:17 pm
Kudos for “The Sense of an Ending”
The Sense of an Ending by Julian Barnes (2011 Man Booker Prize winner) leads the reader through the murky passageways of memory, while musing about the nature of time and history.
The story opens with fragments of memories that, according to the narrator, are arranged “in no particular order” along with the caveat—“what you end up remembering isn’t always the same as what you have witnessed.” With this first paragraph, the book’s tenor is established.
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